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I waited on the dock for many days.
It was hard to tell that the hours were passing because the sky's clouds were a monotone, staid gray, covering the sky enough to make one forget that it had once been blue…
The water was too low for my swinging feet to touch it and I swung them like a metronome, tick and tick and tick and tick, because they were the markers of the hours. And the hours passed by like snails and rabbits, because sometimes, when I was hopeful, I believed that I could be there for hours. But then other times, when I all I could see was the white, bleak mist over the blackened waters, the hours were horrible tortures.
I woke up early and went to bed late, for him.
To pass the time, I would try to conjure up his face from my memory, which was as scattered as wind blown papers. It was a painful game and I don't know why I continued to do it… you see, I couldn't really remember him. Sometimes I would say to myself, "Surely, his eyes are blue." And then doubt would fill my like a venom and I would say, "No, they couldn't be anything other then brown." Then I would look up into the mist for some sort of answer but it would laugh at me and confuse me entirely. The mist was my enemy. I wouldn't cry, you know, he would've said to be strong. I wouldn't let the wet air clog my brain.
He is coming, I would think. He is coming and he loves me.
The mist would laugh. How can you be so sure? It would say. It has been a decade. How do you know that he hasn't forgotten you? There are many other women in the world. You are not so beautiful.
Then I would be afraid.
At times like those, I would escape from the mist and I would run up the stairs to my seaside house and I would sit lonely and wet from my shimmering eyes. Of course that couldn't be true, I would say to myself. The mist has lied.
I miss you, love.
He'd said, before leaving, that he would always be with me. I made him promise to stay alive, for me, because wars are terrible places. He'd promised. He couldn't break his promise. He would come back…
Years passed on the dock. I was thin and pale with worry. The mist made me weary. My legs were sore. I didn't eat enough.
You are not so beautiful, whispered the mist, surrounding me with its dead aroma. It would try to lull me to sleep but I would be strong, for him. Someday he would come back on his boat. Soon, I would say to myself.
Come home.
But the years rolled by and were carried with the tide.
It was hard to tell that the hours were passing because the sky's clouds were a monotone, staid gray, covering the sky enough to make one forget that it had once been blue…
The water was too low for my swinging feet to touch it and I swung them like a metronome, tick and tick and tick and tick, because they were the markers of the hours. And the hours passed by like snails and rabbits, because sometimes, when I was hopeful, I believed that I could be there for hours. But then other times, when I all I could see was the white, bleak mist over the blackened waters, the hours were horrible tortures.
I woke up early and went to bed late, for him.
To pass the time, I would try to conjure up his face from my memory, which was as scattered as wind blown papers. It was a painful game and I don't know why I continued to do it… you see, I couldn't really remember him. Sometimes I would say to myself, "Surely, his eyes are blue." And then doubt would fill my like a venom and I would say, "No, they couldn't be anything other then brown." Then I would look up into the mist for some sort of answer but it would laugh at me and confuse me entirely. The mist was my enemy. I wouldn't cry, you know, he would've said to be strong. I wouldn't let the wet air clog my brain.
He is coming, I would think. He is coming and he loves me.
The mist would laugh. How can you be so sure? It would say. It has been a decade. How do you know that he hasn't forgotten you? There are many other women in the world. You are not so beautiful.
Then I would be afraid.
At times like those, I would escape from the mist and I would run up the stairs to my seaside house and I would sit lonely and wet from my shimmering eyes. Of course that couldn't be true, I would say to myself. The mist has lied.
I miss you, love.
He'd said, before leaving, that he would always be with me. I made him promise to stay alive, for me, because wars are terrible places. He'd promised. He couldn't break his promise. He would come back…
Years passed on the dock. I was thin and pale with worry. The mist made me weary. My legs were sore. I didn't eat enough.
You are not so beautiful, whispered the mist, surrounding me with its dead aroma. It would try to lull me to sleep but I would be strong, for him. Someday he would come back on his boat. Soon, I would say to myself.
Come home.
But the years rolled by and were carried with the tide.
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El aire gélido se coló en la habitación y alborotó los papeles minuciosamente acomodados en el escritorio. Tronándose los nudillos de la mano izquierda, Julio se incorporó y cerró la ventana de un golpe. Afuera el cielo se caía pedazo por pedazo. Reacomodó el desorden que se había hecho en su mesa de trabajo, colocando cada documento en su lugar: los de etiqueta amarilla en la carpeta amarilla, los marcados con verde en la papeleta verde y así consecutivamente con cuatro colores más.
Procedió a sacar un cuaderno de portadas negras de su
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Jumping off the London Tower
You can't be insane 500 feet above ground.
You're hands felt cold. Grasping for life, grasping for something other than the gravel beneath us. I can feel the treads, the old stiches, the patterns ingraved into your skin, grazing into mine. You'll form my gloves, because in all honesty, it is freezing up here. It's cold and white, blinding us with it's supposed beauty. You're hands grasp tighter. Ground against our feet or ground against our heads? It makes no difference to the perception of our world. But only for our last gaze of it.
You're breath is warm against mine. Shaky and unsure since the first time you cried. Words are lost at high
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flight
you mentioned vulnerability but that's my
weakness. i can wash anything off, no lady
macbeth. i'm all copper and silver and
anything that conducts. the current is my currency,
soon as it's vintage, and i'm always fast.
free will is real so you
can't touch me, and
i'm a gambler
(don't remind me tomorrow if i'm grey)
but i'm invincible. someday,
i'll withdraw it all in words,
when it's sluggish and slighty off. like shifting
gears, i can skip a few on my way back
down, and i barely feel it. that's the truth.
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Mmm... I was having a little trouble with my novel and had to warm-up. It was a little strange to write in past tense after writing in present tense for my novel for the past few weeks, but it was nice.
Don't know where this is supposed to end, I might finish it someday.
Inspired partially by "Coming Home" ([link]), at least the beginning of the song. The rapping is okay, I just like Skylar's part a lot
Also, Zeke put the theme of traveling in my head... see what you've done? SEE?
EDIT: Yay! Got this into my school's literary/art magazine
Don't know where this is supposed to end, I might finish it someday.
Inspired partially by "Coming Home" ([link]), at least the beginning of the song. The rapping is okay, I just like Skylar's part a lot
Also, Zeke put the theme of traveling in my head... see what you've done? SEE?
EDIT: Yay! Got this into my school's literary/art magazine
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Amazing. It truly is. One word of criticism though: Maybe some variation in transitions in the first two paragraphs? You seem to use because/and a lot. Either way its stunningly written. It is just my opinion that the latter part of it is more artistically written then the former.